“…of darkness then light.
Of complete cession.
Boom boom, boom boom.
Of silence eternal.
The end…..”
I am Dubem. I woke up
this morning with a stifling sense of foreboding. Lo, my wife Uchenna lay
shivering in a pool of her own sweat.
It’s a hot day in Yola and I am sweating and panting as I
climb up hill to the Church of Assumption. I’d had to park at the bottom of the
hill as the car park is full. I love my wife Uchenna and I would die for her
but this errand is one I wish I didn’t have to run. It is a Sunday morning and
my wife is home alone and ill in bed and I would much rather be at home with
her. Unfortunately Felicia her best friend is leaving for the States tonight
and Uchenna has a package for her sister, so here I am. A young man brushes
past me and hurries on up without an apology. His yellow caftan makes me
uneasy but I brush off the feeling. I
have to hurry back to my wife is my one consuming thought.
I haven’t been in a church since my wedding three years ago and
to say it feels strange is an understatement. I sit myself at the back and wait
as I have sent a bb message to Felicia. I wonder how much of the mass I would
have to take before she comes to relieve me. I try to listen as the priest
talks about God’s love. His voice has a hypnotic quality and for the first time
today my sense of foreboding eases off a little. I say a little prayer for
Uchenna as a fat lady with two kids squeezes past me to sit at the other end of
the pew. One of the kids a little girl of about four years old smiles at me. She
has the most beautiful eyes I've ever seen. I smile back.
Suddenly, I hear a sound like a banger and I feel intense burning
heat from my inside. It started at the back of my throat and in the blink of an
eye it consumes my whole body. I do not know what to think. I black out
briefly. When I come to, it’s cold, very cold and misty. The church is empty
seems like mass is over. Where is Felicia then? A yellow fabric clad limb catches
my attention. Why is there a severed arm lying on the aisle? I pick myself and
Uchenna’s package up off the floor and take a few steps forward. My foot encounters
something which rolls slightly. It is the slightly charred head of my little friend;
her eyes are glazed in an eternal question. I begin to cry.
“What is this?”
My eyes suddenly seem to open and all around me is death. A
woman with both legs blown off stares ahead in a state of shock, the priest is
slumped against the podium, impaled by a large piece of metal. I can neither
hear nor smell anything but I feel fine except for an overwhelming spring of
sorrow in my soul. I can’t take much more of this; I have to get
home to Uchenna. As I turn to look once more at my little friend, I see me.
Half of my head is blown off. I stare in fascination as grey matter tinged with
blood seep out of the jagged gaping wound.
I will myself to wake up from this bad dream. It works as
the gruesome scene fades away.
…………………………………………………
Uchenna goes to the table and tries to eat the breakfast
that Dubem made for her. She smiles fondly as she feels the stone cold boiled yam.
It hadn’t occurred to him that by the time she’d be ready to eat, the yams
would be quite cold and inedible. She eats the cold eggs and swallows the analgesic. They are going to the hospital as soon as Dubem returns. She flops
on the sofa and turns on the TV. “Breaking News on Aljazeera, a suicide bomber
today detonated himself…….” The bell peals four times in sets of twos. Dubem is
back she goes to get the door.
“The steady unrest and menace of boko haram is steadily
working on everyone’s nerves…..”
She thinks as she opens the door to Dubem. A news reporter’s voice comes on on the TV;
“…..the body count so far at the church of Assumption in
Mubi, Yola State has been placed at thirty; there are no survivors from the
main auditorium of the church.”
Uchenna opens the door slowly. There isn't anyone there,
only the sticky taped wrapped package that her husband had taken out this
morning lay at the door step.
THE END
RIO
Omg! So tragic. Damn you cowardly suicide bombers/sponsors/government to hell. These are people. HUMAN BEINGS like your weak selves.
ReplyDeleteSo sad!!! Thanks for reading.
DeleteOh, dear Lord! That's all I can say.
ReplyDeleteI know the feeling.
DeleteOmg!!!
ReplyDeleteThat was sooooo vivid and intense!
Remi, I think this might be your best yet.....
Thanks hon, the plan is to get better ;-) Glad you like it.
DeletePoignant.... Captivating, thought provoking piece. Did I mention, heart-wrenching?
ReplyDeleteGosh!!!!! It made the pain of those who have lost their loved ones through the senseless killings by Boko Haram, that much closer.
My BEST RIOwrites piece ever!!!!!
Thank you mami!!
DeleteOmg! Rio i ws drawn 2tears,ha,e pain me say e end quik.wish her huby had survived.so intense n a reminder dt we shud pray 4our country/nation. Weldone dear*
ReplyDeleteThank you Kandy......true talk, we need to keep praying.
Deletegod mother of the short story form that is who u are...totally totally loved it
ReplyDeleteHigh praise!! I'm flattered.
DeleteReminola darling... Another heartrending story that pierces the heart. Ah my friend, you use your words so cleverly. You never fail to elicit the intended emotions from me. Well done lady.
ReplyDeleteThanks hon!
DeleteThis just makes me realise how real the bombings were for a lot of people, it so sad...great writing though! Kudos!
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